u peep..
i smile...
when u sleep..
i see..light..
when u turn things bright..
when i go unnoticed..
records u keep..
Im the perfect imperfection..
all the time u say..
we walk..
hand in hand..
u get down on your knees..
I laugh..
u love..
memories that reap..
I hav a secret..
within me..
I live..
when u breathe
:)
oye kya faadu poem likhi hai bole to jhakkzzz
ReplyDeleteagain, beautiful ending. :)
ReplyDeletefeels like u concieve ends first.
may be ... im nt sure though....as far as i remember they r devised at the end nly...thanks fr reading again :)
ReplyDeletewonderful .. I could derive so many meanings ..
ReplyDeletethnxx bhaiya!!! :)
ReplyDeleteA short but very sweet read! Romanticism at it's descriptive best.. Great work!
ReplyDelete:) thanx a lot !!
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