Friday, February 26, 2010

Come As U aRe...

This is one title I found on some other blog...It somehow caught my attention....and kept catching it...I feel obsessed with the word you !! ...thats quite funny....that lady writes amazing and her words...though very few that she uses...deliver some kind of a story in themselves.....i dont want to try and be like her...but i do want to write on this title...here it goes....ive a widow in my mind as i write it ...so YOU may now read on.... :)


come as you are
the winds are racing through my hair
I stand closed near the open window
open up some pieces of my closed fate from above

I gathered the courage to race through the time
they said it wont be easy without you
come as something that gives them no words
come as a rise...I'm falling apart

I ask Him at times why me ?
He says its a testing span crossing by
be my shelter through these roads..
come as a way..a new way to life...

I had troubles facing the adversities alone...
lonely was expected ...helpless was worst...
come as a song that makes me falls asleep
I'm tired of counting the shooting stars...

I dont need you because I can't survive
I need you to stop others from nagging me all the time
come as you are...come as you were
come as something never taken apart...

9 comments:

  1. ...and the best creation in the "esoteric world" ever!

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  2. o wao i got a toduu !! hehe ...thnx bond :)

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  3. good one..quite deep as is ur 'style'..hehe
    no but seriously u have a knack of saying v complicated things wdout much complexity..dts d judgement n d comment !!!

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  4. hardly matters dat u found the title somewhere
    what is special is u r wer able to present it in such a wonderful way...

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  5. thank u so much :) thnx fr reading

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  6. One of the best pieces of work I've come across in the blogsphere.. No words to congratulate you.. Just a double thumbs up.. Brilliant..

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